Assignment 4 · First draft

Assignment 4 · First draft

This link takes you to the first draft (post feedback) of assignment 4. The version from the tutor with corrections and notes is lengthy so it will be placed here but not with a full set of notes. Instead I will outline some of the changes below:

Submitted to tutor

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Version with some feedback highlighted below

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The feedback ranged from some structural changes needed to be made in the arguments to working on the citations. The conclusion needs adjusting in the sense that I included references without backing them up and thus introduced new material in the conclusion not appropriate. Later in there were some problems with the references to to some some of the protagonists used in to illustrate points, such as the Bechers and their work on the the water towers from their typology series and Riis and his work as social documentary photographer.

 

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I'm a student photographer studying through the OCA a UK based arts university. I'm in the foundation year of my studies and enjoying it immensely. I'm also a yoga teacher and co-founder of Bodhiyoga a buddhism based yoga teacher training program that runs in the UK and Spain each year. As a photographer I'm interested in all forms of fine art. I find the arts really important in my life. I love nature and aim to be in the outdoors as much as I can. Generally I think that all the different strands of my life are flowing to towards self development in the greatest sense of the term. The arts, buddhist practice yoga and meditation are all tools to that end. I feel committed to communication the these values in the world both through the visual arts as well as teaching.

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